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I noticed on amazon that they pulled a line out of A MAGIC OF TWILIGHT and put it underneath the title. Which got me to wondering...
How important is the first line of a novel to a reader? I would think that it's not as important as the first line of a short story, since readers tend to be more 'patient' with a novel. But does the first line of a novel matter? Do you expect to be hooked from line one?
I'm curious...
Just for grins, here are the first lines from each of my novels (in no particular order). Which one makes you most inclined to read on? And most importantly, why? Here they are:
For that matter, which one doesn't grab you, and why?
Or, for another game entirely, can you tell me which line belongs to which book? :-)
How important is the first line of a novel to a reader? I would think that it's not as important as the first line of a short story, since readers tend to be more 'patient' with a novel. But does the first line of a novel matter? Do you expect to be hooked from line one?
I'm curious...
Just for grins, here are the first lines from each of my novels (in no particular order). Which one makes you most inclined to read on? And most importantly, why? Here they are:
Thunder arrived as a stunning burst of light.
The lioness slipped through the tall, dry grass surrounding the house, her muscular haunches down as she stalked.
He woke up... somewhere.
McWIlms never let his hand stray far from the sheathed dagger's hilt.
She had a name, but she would not let it enter her thoughts.
Hell screamed behind them, a nightmare of fire and death.
Pause. And shiveringly inhale.
Jemi pushed the welding equipment into the navigational compartment.
Raw power smeared red and purple across the night sky, held captive in the glow of the mage-lights...
MUSIC UP:
"Talk about jumping out of the frying pan..."
Wednesday had to be the most depressing night of the week in any nightclub.
CosTa's belly ached, her stomach muscles drawn taut from lack of food over the last three days.
The autumn day was as hot as any in recent memory.
The pines nearest Torin Mallaghan sighed in the wind as if weary of holding up their branches.
The stone was a gift of the glowing sky.
If a city can have a gender, Nessantico was female.
SStragh stepped unsteadily from the floating stone into moonlit darkness, her bones aching from the cold, her nostrils full of the sharp smell of ozone from the time storm, her neck raw and torn from her fight with the Gairk Klaido.
"Hey!" Aaron shouted.
Green Town sweltered.
For that matter, which one doesn't grab you, and why?
Or, for another game entirely, can you tell me which line belongs to which book? :-)
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Oh this is fun! Let's see... I particularly like:
Thunder arrived as a stunning burst of light.
The lioness slipped through the tall, dry grass surrounding the house, her muscular haunches down as she stalked.
He woke up... somewhere.
Hell screamed behind them, a nightmare of fire and death.
I think that one was my favorite. :-D
Wednesday had to be the most depressing night of the week in any nightclub.
The pines nearest Torin Mallaghan sighed in the wind as if weary of holding up their branches.
The stone was a gift of the glowing sky.
If a city can have a gender, Nessantico was female.
SStragh stepped unsteadily from the floating stone into moonlit darkness, her bones aching from the cold, her nostrils full of the sharp smell of ozone from the time storm, her neck raw and torn from her fight with the Gairk Klaido.
These were the ones that were less successful for me. Not that I dislike them, merely that they don't grab my interest in the same way as the above.
Pause. And shiveringly inhale.
Jemi pushed the welding equipment into the navigational compartment.
MUSIC UP:
This last one confused me. That doesn't mean I wouldn't keep reading, it just didn't make any sense out of context, which of course is true of so many first lines...
"Talk about jumping out of the frying pan..."
Raw power smeared red and purple across the night sky, held captive in the glow of the mage-lights...
CosTa's belly ached, her stomach muscles drawn taut from lack of food over the last three days.
The autumn day was as hot as any in recent memory.
"Hey!" Aaron shouted.
Green Town sweltered.
In trying to parse out the difference in the first group versus the second, I think it's that I like the ones that are a little different, a little offbeat, but also give me something to grab onto... interesting but not too confusing in their different-ness, if that makes sense. I'm also just partial to lines that are just really beautiful... or just sound really beautiful to me or create a strong image. Like the one about the branches.
The ones that don't just automatically suck me in are the ones that are either a little too mundane, or are too far out of my thinking.
And I think over all, first lines ARE more important to writers than readers. Because I tend to read a full first chapter, I give a book a lot of room to grow on me. I've never put anything DOWN because of the first line, that I can think of.
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