Here's a question I'm asked relatively frequently at cons and other gatherings of fledgling writers: "Is writing short stories first a good way to start 'breaking into' writing novels?"

It's a question to which I really don't have a good answer. For the writers of my generation (I'm old, after all...), yes, many of us 'broke into' the field by first writing and publishing a body of short fiction, then eventually moving on to novel-length work. For many of us, that strategy worked -- at least I can point to several people who are still regularly publishing novels who followed that route. For me personally, I found that the 'short' fiction I was writing just kept getting longer and longer, that the tales I wanted to tell needed more and more room.

But... I do have some doubts as to whether deliberately starting with short fiction is a good strategy or not. As with every other strategy to learn an art, it has its advantages and disadvantages. Here's how I see them...

The advantages should be fairly obvious: short fiction allows you to learn the basics of the craft of fiction, and has the added advantage of letting you do so relatively quickly. You can experiment with voice and structure, with different genres and different stylistic devices -- and if the experiment fails (as many will), well, you've 'lost' a few weeks instead of the few years it took you to write that deformed and hopeless lump of a novel. (You never really 'lose' anything from a failed experiment; there is knowledge in failure...) With short fiction, you can find your own individual voice before you try writing something as time-consuming and monumental as a novel. Publish a bunch of short fiction, and you have a built-in audience for your first novel; publish a bunch of short fiction, and you have a nice set of credentials to lay out in front of that agent or editor when you're shopping your book -- heck, you may even have an award or two to toss in there. This is all good.

Yet in many ways, short fiction and novels are different beasts. The skills you learn in short fiction don't necessarily translate into equal skills for writing long fiction. The pacing is different: a short story needs to start as close to the end as possible while a novel may start much further back from the climax. The way you build a novel is often not something that you can duplicate in short fiction, as novels use a more intricate structure (and on the flip side, short stories can often use wildly experimental methods that work within the confinement of a short story, but which would get deadly tiresome to the reader in a novel). Scope is different, since short stories tend to use a microscope while a novel uses a wide-angle lens: you can tell the tale of a battle in short fiction, but you can't give us the whole five-year long war. Setting is different: you generally have one or two setting in short fiction; in a novel you might have dozens -- which means that the worldbuilding has to be much more in depth; you won't get away with a painted backdrop in a novel. Plotting is different: short fiction tends to have a 'straight-line' plot; a novel's plot is generally more complex, and has the added complexity of sub-plots supporting the main plot. Characterization is even different: the character arc in short fiction will usually show the 'top' of the arc -- that defining moment when the protagonist's life is changed -- while in a novel, the writer can show much more of the arc. Characterization is generally slower and deeper in a novel.

You don't learn to play piano by learning to play guitar. Yes, they're both musical instruments and in learning one you do gain some fundamentals about music that you can take with you to the other instrument. But if you want to really learn to play piano, you need to sit down at the keyboard and play. Ultimately, if you want to write novels, you have to write a novel.

So I give the question to you out there: "Is writing short stories first a good way to start 'breaking into' writing novels?" What do you think?

From: [identity profile] dancingwriter.livejournal.com


For the reasons you so eloquently outline, no, writing short stories first is not a good way to break into writing novels. But, as you also mention, in some genres it does seem to be a way of easing the process of selling novels.

I'm not much of a short story writer myself. But I've started playing around with the form some as a way of fleshing out episodes of back story and of getting better acquainted with new or minor characters. If I should end up with a couple stories that anyone besides me would be interested in reading, that would be a nice bonus, but it's not something I expect to happen. :-)

From: [identity profile] sleigh.livejournal.com


I'm not certain, though, that writing short fiction isn't a good way to break into novels. I can make the argument either way -- it's the way I did it, but I don't delude myself into thinking that it's thus the only path...

From: [identity profile] antonstrout.livejournal.com

My 2 cents


It's only good in the business sense, in that agents or editors might take note of someone who's had some short story sales.

For me, it's like the difference between being a marathon runner and a sprinter... different skill sets with just the barest of correlations.

From: [identity profile] sleigh.livejournal.com

Re: My 2 cents


But there are some similarities in the requisite skills. I'm just not certain there's enough synchronicity...

From: [identity profile] davidbcoe.livejournal.com


I agree with Steve and Anton that in many ways writing short fiction involves a different set of skills, but I really think that Kathryn raises an excellent point. I often use short stories as a way of worldbuilding and developing characters that I intend to use in my longer work. In this way, shorter works become part of the novel writing process -- they give me background, let me develop my characters and world, help me hone the voice or voices I intend to use for the larger project. And if along the way, I wind up with publishable short pieces, all the better. Short fiction may demand a somewhat different skill set, but sharpening those skills can only serve to improve my craft overall. Plus, by sending out work to different markets I reach a broader audience.

From: [identity profile] sleigh.livejournal.com


I've never done that -- I don't think you could take any portion of one of my novels and make a decent (i.e. publishable) short story.

But I'd agree that anything that improves your craft helps.

From: [identity profile] davidbcoe.livejournal.com


"I don't think you could take any portion of one of my novels and make a decent (i.e. publishable) short story."

I've read your work, and I know better. There's a richness to your worlds that could easily foster publishable short stories.
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From: [identity profile] anghara.livejournal.com


*If you are good at both*, then yes, getting your name out there helps. But - taking myself as a data point, and I've definitely heard other "natural" novelists say the same thing, I just don't write short that easily. I produce a short story once every so often, and it's a blip rather than the norm. My natural length is 80 000+. and I WRITE like that, I write lush and rich and complex and, well, LONG, and no amount of coaxing will stuff all that into a short story of 5000 or even 7000 words without cutting off its limbs, its tail and its ears to fit into that box.

Sure there are people who are blessed who can switch from Short Story Mode to Novelist Mode and be good at both. Others tend to be good at - or at least substantially better at - one thing over the other. And if you're a "natural" novelist, getting your name known by selling bad short stories may be far worse than remaining unknown...

From: [identity profile] sleigh.livejournal.com


Short and long fiction can be different animals, and yes, some people seem to be significantly better (and more comfortable) with one form over the other...

From: [identity profile] dsgood.livejournal.com


Some writers don't work best at either length. There are some whose natural length is the novella or novelette. And I know of one (not now writing) who wrote too long for the series market; his mega-novel was turned into a series of novels, but a whole lot got chopped out.


From: [identity profile] grrm.livejournal.com

first short stories first


From a strictly commercial standpoint, yes, it still makes sense to write and sell some short stories first, before publishing a novel.

Today's publishing environment is relentlessly competitive and bottom line. The hardest book to sell is not your first, but your fourth. There are a lot of three-book careers these days -- promising writers whose publishers dropped them after their first three novels did not sell. The stands are full of first and second novels by people that most readers have never heard of.

In this environment, it behooves the new writer to do everything he can to gain a competitive advantage, and make sure he's the one whose name leaps out. One way to do this is with short fiction. The magazines are dying, yes, but they are not dead yet -- and if even a small percentage of the 20,000 plus who read ASIMOV'S or F&SF recognize your name from your short stories and pick up your first novel, that gives you a leg up on all those other writers who never published short fiction.

Also, while awards and award nominations per se don't sell books, they may convince your publisher to give you a higher print run and more promotion than you'd get otherwise, and it is MUCH easier to get nominated for a short story than for a novel. After all, there are three short fiction categories in the Hugos, and only one for novels. The same is true with the Nebulas.

Write short fiction first.

From: [identity profile] sleigh.livejournal.com

Re: first short stories first


Writing short fiction first was certainly the way both you and I started out, mumblety-mumble years ago -- and I agree with your assessment that the toughest book to sell is the fourth one: I've heard Mike Resnick say exactly the same thing, too.

Pragmatically, even today, I suspect it's still one of the better paths, though certainly not the only one.

From: [identity profile] tardistenant.livejournal.com


Truth is I don't much like to read short fiction. I have a couple of magazines I go through faithfully, but often find that just as I'm getting comfortably settled, it's over. If I don't like to read them, it's bound to affect my ability to write them. But the theory is, that if I write and sell a few stories, (an easier market) I could maybe get my name borderline recognizable enough to get an editor to look at one of the growing stack of unsold novels.

Or not. I still believe the novels are good. For that matter I believe the short stories are good. I could be wrong. I'm just no good at sales.
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