The entire essay (cleaned up and revised a bit) is here, if you're interested.

From: [identity profile] minnehaha.livejournal.com


The whole things was great. Cheerful and upbeat as well as strikingly forthright. Very nicely put!

K.

From: [identity profile] sleigh.livejournal.com


Thanks, K -- your opinion means quite a lot to me!

From: [identity profile] minnehaha.livejournal.com


What's this for? There's a good essay in here, but it needs a serious edit or several.

B

From: [identity profile] sleigh.livejournal.com


What's it for? Mostly it's just for me, jotting down some reflection I've been having with myself over the past week, with the thought that maybe other writers and would-be writers might find it of passing interest. I agree, if I were intending it for publication somewhere, it would need some judicious pruning, but I don't have any intention of that. It's casual journaling, and deliberately so.

But... what would be your editing suggestions? I'd be interested!
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