OK, since the majority of the respondents, via e-mail and LJ comments, gave me variations on "That moving text makes my eyes bleed" (hey, when
haniaw tells me it's a problem, it's a problem...), I now have a Version 2 of the A MAGIC OF TWILIGHT teaser up on the site with a voiceover rather than compressing text. Mind you, the voice is mine and I probably should find someone (hey, Frank!) with a more melodious speaking voice, but what do you think now? Better? Worse?
EDITED TO ADD: Make sure you reload the page if it's in your browser history. I just went to make sure it had loaded properly, and got the old one until I refreshed...
EDITED TO ADD: Make sure you reload the page if it's in your browser history. I just went to make sure it had loaded properly, and got the old one until I refreshed...