[identity profile] lollardfish.livejournal.com 2014-03-04 02:40 am (UTC)(link)
What a great review! I can't wait to get a chance to read it. I only read the middle bits in draft ... how does it end! :)

[identity profile] sleigh.livejournal.com 2014-03-04 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
It's a Shakespearian tragedy. Everybody dies.

[identity profile] lollardfish.livejournal.com 2014-03-04 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
That's true in every story. Well, unless you are dealing with immortals ... hmmm ....